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There is a little Sun Tzu in all of us.
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Post by stumpy wallace » Mon Mar 17, 2003 11:37 pm

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Post by Evil_Warlock » Fri Apr 04, 2003 6:14 pm

Story is flawless, however the delivery can use some work... all in all great job bud :P
- Evil Warlock - lvl 40Grief mage
- Bren Bressal - lvl 42 sword
- K F O B - lvl 139 BM (DT)
There are 3 types of people in life, people who can count, and people who can't...
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Post by Evil_Warlock » Fri Apr 04, 2003 6:15 pm

You left right when they got to arwic! i hate you!
- Evil Warlock - lvl 40Grief mage
- Bren Bressal - lvl 42 sword
- K F O B - lvl 139 BM (DT)
There are 3 types of people in life, people who can count, and people who can't...
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Ur a :n00b:
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Post by stumpy wallace » Thu Apr 10, 2003 12:42 pm

im at a creative slump ATM if you guys could give me some ideas on what to do i would appreciate it
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