Inner Sanity

Phred · Post by **Phred** » Sat Jul 05, 2003 9:45 pm

I was digging through some of my older works the other day and I found this one, it a good example as to just how much my style as a writer has changed in the last 5 years...

"Inner Sanity"

So much for this energy,
I could belive,
Its come back to me,
Breaking down insanity,
I could decieve,
My friends, My family,
Who cares whats wrong in life?
I could conceive,
A new reality.

Take... Me...
Over the edge,
For twisted ends,
Broken away,
And lost everyday.
So... I...
Could care less,
What hypocracy blessed,
Taken Aside,
So I've lost my mind.

My thoughts have broken me,
So much for life,
I thought I was free,
Overcome by whats not real,
I lost my life,
All thats gone left to much to feel,
Who fears what does not exist?
Restart my life,
I'd like a better deal.

DL · Post by DL » Sat Jul 05, 2003 11:23 pm

Have you ever really looked back thruogh old writings and CRINGE.....like...ewww....did I really write that?

I do that alot.....hahahaha.....I have stuff from when I was a teen in school and was forced to write for my english lit class.

One of my own favorite sayings....."I'm a poetress....some of my poetry is good....some is so-so and some is down right awful but each and every one are MINE!"....

My style varies depending on my mood

Phred · Post by **Phred** » Sun Jul 06, 2003 3:09 pm

I did that when I was going through all of the stuff.. in fact I read the first few lines of one and said "I think this was a good one" I got about halfway through entering it into the site to psot when I suddenly realizeed.. it was pathetic....I couldnt even rearrange the lines to where they made sense unless you knew why I had written it in the first place....

so I psoted this one instead